Evaluation:
My task was
to create an article for a magazine of my choice, however what the article was
about was provided for me. The article had to consist of information regarding
illegal music downloading/file sharing. Within this article I had to provide
two different points of view, statistics, my personal opinion, and artist’s
viewpoints. I decided to write for Vibe Music Magazine as I thought that it
would be suitable. Vibe Music Magazine focuses on the rap and hip-pop music
scene and the artists. I decided that I wanted to write against illegal music
downloading.
I first
asked my friends around me what they thought about illegal music downloading.
Whether they were for or against it. Many of my peers were for illegal
downloading, they said that they didn’t really mind downloading music illegal
as long as they received it within spending too much time. I went on to a
search engine ‘Google’ and decided to look up some statistics on illegal music
downloading. That was my first step. I managed to gather some useful information.
The main websites that I visited where to The Guardian, BBC News, and
Wikipedia. The strong point from this information was that most of it was
reliable however, the information from Wikipedia was unreliable because I
didn’t know how much or it was true or false. Nevertheless, I still included it
within my work.
I decided to
keep my written work formal. It isn’t hard to understand and can be read by
many genres. Even though I’m writing for an urban music magazine, I know that
my article would be read within difficulty. My article had to be approx. 400
words. But I exceeded over 500. My article is fairly short, and I have included
some rhetorical questions to make the audience and reader think about what they
are doing. I wanted to include artist’s viewpoints. The main artist that I
spoke about was Eminem. He is against illegal music downloading, I found that
his views similarly backed up my own so I wanted to outline him as clearly as
possible. The picture that I used on my article was of Eminem on the left page
and it filled up the whole page with a quote from himself. Without reading the
article and just looking at the left page, the reader can tell who I will be
speaking about, what I will be speaking about, and what side I’m on. I wanted
to include a catchy and smart headline, something memorable. ‘Illegal Music
Downloading- Right? Or Rightfully Wrong?’ This clearly states that I’ against
it. ‘Rightfully Wrong’ underlines what this is about. The image that I chose of
Eminem had a colour scheme of grey and black. I wanted my background colour to
be black as it went well with the picture and the whole look of the magazine.
InDesign was
a new program to me and this is the first time I used it. I learnt many skills
whilst creating my magazine article. The following skills are just a few: the
rectangle tool to create a background colour, how to create a textbox with the
‘T’ tool, Clicking on ‘Fill Content’ to fill the page with the image and ‘Fill
Frame’ to make the image fit into a frame, I also learnt that the yellow and
green lines means that the text boxes and pictures are in line with each other.
The strengths of using InDesign was that it is very easy to use however one
weakness which I came across was the way an image is places. My image was big,
and if I changed it would pixilate, I had minor difficulties with that but I
was able to sort it out. If I were to
professionally publish this article I would like it to be hand held in a real
magazine however due to the audience of Vibe Magazine I know that they are
teenagers and very up to date, so due to that I would publish it online so it
would be easily accessible. You could read it anywhere and any place.
Audience
feedback was useful to me as it told me how I could improve if I were to create
another magazine. The feedback I received was mainly good which boosted my
confidence on maybe creating another one. If I were to set myself 4 targets, I
would say 1) Maybe choose my image wisely. 2) make sure that I stay within the
word limit. 3) Brush up my skills on InDesign, and 4) improve on my research
skills.

This is a good evaluation. You wrote in detail about your work and included audience feedback, however it could be better by extending on the audience feedback.
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