Feedback received

Below is the feedback I received for my magazine.

From the feedback that I received on my magazine, I found out that what attracted people to my magazine was mostly the photography. I feel that I done a good job on the photography. Overall the improvements that I could work on are the images to be the same colour. I however wanted the photography to be a mixture as I already had a strong colour scheme of 3 colours, I felt that if I included all of the images to be in colour it would cause too much of a colour clash. The changing of my masthead was a good decision. As stated above the masthead is bold and it stands out. That is what I wanted.

Survey

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Final 3 pieces of magazine

 This is my final cover.
I have changed many aspects of it. First off, I added yellow to the cover as it was included in the DPS and I wanted the magazine to be consistent throughout. And I also changed the size and position of the main cover line. 

 This is my final contents page. I have added points of yellow to make the words that are the most important stand out. 

This is my final double page spread. I have stuck to the same colour scheme of yellow, red, and white. I also sorted out the pull quote on the left hand side of the page. I made the font size a little larger so that it can be seen.